Comment: Today we gave peer feedback on our written response and on our painted fish art. What are the benefits from receiving peer feedback? What type of feedback creates the best learning? What tips would you suggest for giving feedback? What has been the best feedback you have received?
Oscar the Grouch
4/15/2015 09:42:38 am
Benefits of receiving peer feedback is that you have a second pair of eyes to proofread and make sure that you are constructing your writing properly. Constructive feedback creates the best learning because it is a way of telling someone how they can improve upon their work. In my opinion. Tips I would suggest for giving feedback are to be polite but at the same time get your point across, be specific on how they can improve, and make sure your feedback is helpful and necessary. Some of the best feedback I have received was from Minnie Mouse. Mostly when we are doing the 100 word challenge. She is very helpful and has some really great suggestions on how I can enhance my writing to make it the best it can be.
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squidward
4/15/2015 09:42:43 am
You can get better ideas and make your writing better. For example if I'm struggling at making a story I can get peer help.
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bob
4/15/2015 10:04:58 am
The benefits of receiving peer feedback is if you made a mistake and you did not see then the other persons sees it that you have not seen the before. And when you need ideas then you can go up to a peer and ask for help.
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Narwhale
4/15/2015 10:19:32 am
The benefits of feedback are gaining it for in the future and not need that same feedback again. the best feedback is usually positive and as kind as possible and never point out something that be heard the wrong way or in a different way offensive
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Siri
4/15/2015 10:20:34 am
There are so many benefits from using peer feedback. Some of them are you catch mistakes such as grammar, punctuation and run on sentences, add more descriptive language to your story and improve your writing in general. For me constructive feedback creates the best learning because it lets you know what you need to work on but in a nice friendly way unlike brutally honest. Some tips I would give for giving peer feedback would be don't be mean and say oh you got that that and that wrong how could you even do that. Lay it on them nice so they do not feel bad and think they are a bad writer. Another tip I would give is don't tell them all they need to correct at one time space it out so it doesn't rattle them but like OscarTheGrouch said make sure your still getting your point across. For me there has been no best feedback because it all is good and gives me something to work on.
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Haunter
4/15/2015 10:25:30 am
the benifets of peer editing are that your partner can see errors that you may have missed like puncuation, Grammar and run on sentences
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Chipmunk
4/15/2015 12:43:30 pm
The benefits of receiving peer feedback is that you learn how you can improve your work. Also, after you have read over something so many times you tend to just know what is coming next, and you may miss some spelling or grammar errors. When you get a peer to check over it then they are more likely to read it word for word and catch the small mistakes. I think the best type of feedback is when they are being honest, critical and constructive. When they give you feedback you shouldn't take it personally. I find this to be the best type for my learning because it makes me dig deeper and I learn new things. One tip I would suggest when leaving feedback is to tell the person exactly what to change so it is clear. On the other hand make sure you don't say it in a way that will hurt their feelings or discourage them. Some of the best feedback I have gotten is from Minnie Mouse and Oscar The Grouch. They make sure they get their point across and they give specific feedback and examples.
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Unikitty
4/15/2015 01:14:00 pm
The benefits of peer feedback are
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captainhook
4/15/2015 01:16:36 pm
The benefits of receiving peer feedback is that you will see your mistakes because sometime when you do it yourself you could miss some of the things that you did wrong. For me any type of feed back is great because I know I will could work on a lot of my writing in any kind of paragraph we do. Some tip's I would give is that don't say what they did good at just tell them what they need to work on. And also that be clear on what you want them to improve in because if you aren't then they will be left hanging and confused. Some of the great feedback I have received is by Oscar The Grouch because she focuses on every little detail that I miss and I find it really helpful.
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Puga chan
4/15/2015 01:26:27 pm
The benefits of peer feedback are, sometimes you don't see the mistakes that other people will see. You might have spelt a word wrong and you did not know that, so you would need your peer or another person to point that out and correct it for you. You also get people's opinion, like with our fish art. Maybe they could help you bring out so thing that will make it look better. Or maybe you need to use a pop of color one place but not to much of it. It has benefited me alotby having a peer do feedback on my work, because now I know that there are something's I can work on and improve with my learning.
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dancer83
4/15/2015 01:51:01 pm
The beenefits of peer feedback is that you get someone else's opinion and suggestions on how to make your work better. I think that constructive feedback works best because it lets you know what to work on in a nice, honest way. A tip I would give is to be honest, but polite at the same time. Almost all of the feedback I have received has been good feedback.
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Piglet
4/15/2015 02:09:00 pm
The types of good feedback would be a peer telling another peer they may or may not have spelling mistakes or grammar and variety. Also it would be helpful if a peer would help you with anything like a paragraph by making it fluent or maybe better. The benefits of feed back are peers helping with people to tell if there are mistakes in sentence/paragraph.
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Cress
4/15/2015 02:20:35 pm
The benefits of giving peer feedback is that you get to hear what other people think about your work. If we just gave our selves feedback we wouldn't know what we did wrong because we only think its good because of the knowledge we know. When someone else checks over our work they might find things we didn't see. Sometimes what makes sense to us others not be able to comprehend. I think that feedback that is helpful and useful encourages the best learning. If you just talk about how good the thing is then the person doesn't improve. If the feedback is too harsh, then the person might feel discouraged and won't put their best into their work. Tips that I would give for feedback is that you should always try your hardest to make sure they have something that they can work on, saying that everything is good in their work won't make them better at what they are doing. Giving feedback isn't a time to present them with compliments, you shouldn't be too rude but they should feel satisfied with how much feedback they got. The best feedback I got are ones that make me try harder and strive to get better.
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yasuo
4/15/2015 02:34:44 pm
The benefits of receiving peer feedback is that you get someone elses opinion and usually the person that is giving you feed back will be honest with your mistakes and what you should improve on or work on. I think that teacher feedback creates the best learning simply because the teacher has been teaching for a longer period of time and the teacher will usually know more than the student will know. I would suggest that you should tell the person that you are giving feedback to on why you are giving them suggestions and how they could improve. The best feedback that I have received is feedback that people have been paying attention to the little details and the big details and people who know a lot about grammar.
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Soccer Lover
4/15/2015 02:57:35 pm
Benefits of peer feedback is that you learn how to correct your mistakes if you have made some. Also just to overall become a better writer. Some types of feedback that create the best learning are ones that actually help you improve and become a better writer. A tip I would give is, instead of saying "Oh that's good I like it" you could say "I like what you have but you might want to fix..." The best feedback that I have gotten was from Oscar the Grouch she helped me correct my mistakes and make my writing more powerful .
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Minnie Mouse
4/15/2015 02:59:08 pm
Some of the benefits of giving peer feedback include; getting another perspective from a different side. A peer may look at your work different from how you do. For example: If I was gazing at my fish art I could maybe find one mistake when another person could find two. Another benefit could be, you could ameliorate from their feedback. Personally I think peer feedback brings the best learning because getting feedback from another classmate is a great way of improving. The tips I would give for giving feedback are: be critical and make it reasonable. The best feedback I have received is from Oscar The Grouch because she always gives me very helpful ways to improve and it's reasonable. I also think Chipmunk gives great at giving feedback because her point is valid and she catches things I wouldn't catch in my writing.
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F1uffyPandaMC
4/15/2015 03:32:01 pm
Peer feedback is crucial because it helps you get a better understanding in your learning there for it also helps to so where errors are in your work.
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mr. funny businuss
4/15/2015 06:42:42 pm
the benifets of feed back are to get a second opinion and a suggestion
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Sherlock
4/15/2015 11:37:49 pm
The benefits of peer feedback is that you get to improve on the assignment that you are doing, and they can help you find spelling or grammar mistakes. Honest feedback us the best for learning because you can learn form your mistakes. Your peer is seeing your project from another view, it can help you use stronger language if they don't get it. Tips for giving feedback is that not to be mean, because that's not giving feedback that's just being mean. And if you are receiving feedback, don't be defensive because all your peer is doing is trying to make your project better.
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BasketballPro
4/15/2015 11:52:17 pm
The benefits of peer editing is that your partner will find mistakes that you did not see, and he may give you better suggestions to deepen your thinking since we all have different thinking. Like fix the punctuation in your sentences, grammar, or spelling. I would suggest giving a few tips for descriptive language so it can grab the reader's attention, or like what Siri said, don't give them harsh feedback to make them think they're a bad writer. I've gotten a best feedback by Sir, he mostly gives the good feedback in the Written Responses.
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Topper
4/16/2015 12:05:43 am
I think the benefits for receiving peer feedback is, it helps you improve even more, and might give you a deeper understanding because they might ask a question that makes you think. In my opinion, the best type of learning, is peer feedback because, its not always the teachers job to read everyones. Also there at the same reading level as you so then you can, understand. Some tips I would give are stay on topic and listen. Don't start talking about recess or something. Finally the best feedback I have received is on my first written response, if i had not got the feedback I would have lost many marks, because I forgot grammar,and also could have used better words.
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Tepig
4/16/2015 12:47:32 am
I think that the benifits of receiving feedback is that it helps you enhance your writing. The best feedback I have recived is on my written response and I was told to use more descriptive language
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Batman
4/16/2015 01:14:25 am
The benefits about receiving feed back is that if they find something you need to work on then they can tell you. The best feed back constructive feed back. I think that because you tell people what they need to work on. Some tips I have is like the poster THINK. When you give feed back you can't say " they suck at something ". You have to be nice and say what they need to work on. The best feed back I have got was from Oscar the Grouch in 100 word challenge. She told me what I have to work on but she wasn't rude about it.
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