Register online for the Jump Rope for Heart Campaign and get $5.00 free to kick start your fundraising. Check it out here http://jumpropeforheart.ca/jumphomepage Math - none - Bring a ruler for Math on Monday N.A - Picture Book Written Response due Monday - revise & edit as well as read it out loud to a parent 100 WC - week 8 -Read to a parent, ask for feedback, revise and edit, leave a comment for your blog group S.S. - Hammurabi's Code What factors makes a civilization? Why? (Test Monday) French - film on Monday - Scripts ready to hand in Reminders & Notices Clayton Heights Parent Information Night March 1st - Tours at 6:15-7:00p.m. - Info Session Clayton Theater 7:00 p.m. Band Monday and Wednesday P.E. Tuesday and Thursday PAC raffle tickets for sell Book orders due Monday Feb 29th Think We Book Drive - Please bring any books that are in good condition that they would be willing to donate to this worthy cause. Let's help build a library for kids in rural B.C. Congratulations to Rainbow Sunshine for making it to the special showcase for the 100WC this past week. Comment: We have been writing 100 word stories for the past month. I have given you feedback on several occasions plus you have received feedback from your peers. 1.What area of your writing have you noticed an improvement? 2.What has been working really well for you when writing your 100WC? 3.What are of your writing still needs improvement? 4.What support do you need to help you makes these improvements? |
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ex
2/26/2016 04:05:44 pm
I need to inprove on my spelling.
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expired milk
2/26/2016 04:06:12 pm
sorry mest up
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Tyrone
2/26/2016 04:11:47 pm
I need to improve my punctuation.
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Negative Zero
2/26/2016 08:05:37 pm
I have noticed an improvement on my punctuation. When writing my 100 Word Challenge, I try to write it slowly and edit as I go. I'm still working on my grammar and I need to read more books to improve my writing skills.
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Rihanna
2/26/2016 08:14:26 pm
I am noticing improvement on my punctuation. I'm noticing that I am good at making up stories full of imagination. I think I need to work on adding more descriptive words in my sentences. I think in order for me to have good descriptive words I have to revise and edit very carefully .
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Jjmonkey
2/27/2016 10:49:22 am
I think I'm improving on using more descriptive words in my writing. I'm working well with finding a good topic to fit with our prompt. I need to I'm prove on my punctuation I think I write so fast sometimes that I just forget to add punctuation. I think my parents can help me with editing my work. I do usually do that on Thursdays or Friday's but sometimes I do forget and I really do need to remember.
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Cocopuff
2/27/2016 06:02:06 pm
I noticed that I am better at coming up with different ideas, and I have also gotten better at shrinking my ideas. One area of my writing that needs improvement is that I have to find more descriptive language to put in my stories.
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Cheesecake
2/27/2016 09:07:05 pm
What has been working well is that I have been using comas and they have helped be through my writing. I find it difficult finding only a sertan amount of words.
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Fluffy Rainbow Dash
2/28/2016 12:01:08 pm
An inprovment is my spelling for commas. Something that's been working well is my ideas for my story's. A part of my writing that I need to inprove on is my grammar. I need to practice spelling out words.
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Lilly Tiger
2/28/2016 12:26:39 pm
I have been improving in using more descriptive words but I still have a lot of growing to do. I have really been enjoying coming up with characters, plots, conclusions and the whole thing!!!! I love doing 100 Word challenge, it's one of my favourite things to do in a week. To improve my descriptive writing I need to read it to my parents and ask for better ways to say a word.
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Castiel
2/28/2016 12:38:26 pm
I have noticed an improvement in the amount of descriptive words and sentences I have used. Something that has really working well with my 100 Word Challenges is taking away some useless sentences in my stories so that it comes down to 100 words. Something that still needs improvement is that I need to improve on writing stories that have important messages that the reader can take away from my story. The support I need to make these improvements is that I need to have a better, more thought through plan of what I am going to write about before I start writing.
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Puga chan :)
2/28/2016 12:45:39 pm
I have improved on my creativity in the prompts, I would be stuck and just throw something together but now I can come up with something more detailed. I need to work in my punctuation when I'm writing my story, sometimes I put more then there needs to be. I need my peers to giv me feedback, but also complement my writing, it's not easy to come up with a story in a few simple words!
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Fellsummer4
2/28/2016 01:05:02 pm
I have noticed an improvement on my punctuation I would like to improve on thinking outside to box.
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Diablo
2/28/2016 01:36:53 pm
My writing has Improved a lot that's what I think. I think I should just keep up the good work and do it.
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Tigger
2/28/2016 01:52:35 pm
My fluency and grammar and staying focused on one topic has improved. 😜
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Cinderella
2/28/2016 04:30:49 pm
1.What has improved for me is that my grammar has been really good. Same goes with my punctuation.
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Soccer Lover
2/28/2016 04:47:12 pm
One area of my 100WC I would like to work on is making my story have a big idea or message. I think I have done pretty good in the wrest of the areas but I really want to try to make a big idea. I might not be able to do it every time, because some of the prompts are really hard.
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Randy the chicken
2/28/2016 05:27:06 pm
I think my capitals have improved and I think righting a draft has help quite a bit but I need to work on making my stories flow and I think when we read my story's out loud it helps quit a bit
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Tinker bell
2/28/2016 05:50:39 pm
In my 100 world challenge I have been noticing how I've been getting more fluent and descriptive in my stories. I always have an idea for the 100 word challenge it's just getting it onto paper in only 100 words that the problem. In my story I'm needing to improve on adding a message into my story instead of just having a story with no main/big idea. I'm not quite for how someone can help me add a message or big idea into my story other than myself.
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Albert Einstein 29
2/28/2016 06:41:54 pm
While writing 100 word challenges, I've noticed that my punctuation has gotten better. Something that has been working very well while writing the 100 word challenge stories is using the prompt. Sometimes including the prompt is difficult but other times it is not. My spelling needs a lot of improvement. Using bigger words, so, my vocabulary expands and I improve my spelling.
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Stitch
2/28/2016 07:08:40 pm
I have improved on making my stories more descriptive. Something I am getting better at is taking out the parts of my story that are not needed. Something I need to work on is using different words than "Said" after someone speaks. To make this improvement I need to look in a thesaurus for different words.
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romansoldier
2/28/2016 07:28:34 pm
I have improved on my capitals but need to work on my punctuation more.
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zippy
2/28/2016 08:29:33 pm
I have noticed improvement in my cuneiform. I memorized how to spell my name!
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RainbowSunshine
2/28/2016 08:48:25 pm
I'm improving on my punctuation. I'm working really well on making great ideas of stories. I'm not sure of what part of my writing still needs improvement, but I just look at what my peers say.
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my name is JEFF
2/29/2016 07:43:11 am
I need to work on my punctuation more.
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Batman
2/29/2016 08:10:59 am
An area that I think I have improved on is my descriptive language. I have been using a thesaurus and it has been working. I think what has been working really well for me is I read it to my parents and we go over it. An area that I have to improve on is having a clear big idea or message. Support I need is to get help from a teacher, parent, or peer.
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Sherlock
2/29/2016 08:29:44 am
An area where I've notice improvement, would have to be in getting different ideas for my stories. An area where I still need improvement would have to be in getting better words to make my sentences more descriptive, and to make better sentence starters. Support that I need to reach this goal is to ask my sister to read over my sentences, and use a thesaurus to find better words
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hi
2/29/2016 11:15:38 am
hi teacher i am jake kesd
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Samir Hilal
2/29/2016 11:17:19 am
I wrote tha
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SORRY WRONG WEBSITE MJ
2/29/2016 11:22:19 am
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